Wednesday, 1 November 2017

'Escape Zone 3000' Script (First Draft)

2 comments:

  1. honest opinion? I don't think you need the voice-over at all - it's not me saying 'your voice over sucks', it's me saying you really don't need it. I don't think it adds anything to the visuals, which are doing all the heavy-lifting in terms of story, and that's preferable I think. People will get the vibe you're after! :)

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  2. Ah ok! That seems good actually, it's good to know that visually the story is doing what it needs to do. Thanks again Phil :)

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