Hey Tom :) the only part that I'm struggling to understand is the vertically closing door sequence, to me I'm not sure what happens there in terms of sliding under the door? does he get through or not? is there another closing door in front of those? also the laser beam moment reads really well!
Hey Tom - so at the beginning... that hole, does he drop down it into the prison cell? I think he does, but I can see that transition in the panels? Also - I wonder if we need to be returned to the establishing shot of the city as the end frame - so the complete circle? Maybe we need this shot to understand that this is the 'same hole' and not 'another hole' someplace else?
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ReplyDeleteHey Tom :) the only part that I'm struggling to understand is the vertically closing door sequence, to me I'm not sure what happens there in terms of sliding under the door? does he get through or not? is there another closing door in front of those? also the laser beam moment reads really well!
ReplyDeleteHey Tom - so at the beginning... that hole, does he drop down it into the prison cell? I think he does, but I can see that transition in the panels? Also - I wonder if we need to be returned to the establishing shot of the city as the end frame - so the complete circle? Maybe we need this shot to understand that this is the 'same hole' and not 'another hole' someplace else?
ReplyDeleteYes he drops down into the cell, yes just adding in the establish may give a better read in the end product. Thanks
DeleteYes he gets through, go have a gander at my pre-vis it gives a better sense of camera movement and so on...
ReplyDeleteLink to the Buster Keaton video.
ReplyDeletehttps://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UWEjxkkB8Xs